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This robot intimidates me.
Its gaze tells me it knows more than I can possibly imagine. The fact that it has clear "Yes" and "No" answers, yet also has the option to request additional information shows me that it has attained a level of wisdom where it has trascended complacency and acknowledges the quest for knowledge is neverending. I am in awe of it.
Also, that's a baller sun.
Its gaze tells me it knows more than I can possibly imagine. The fact that it has clear "Yes" and "No" answers, yet also has the option to request additional information shows me that it has attained a level of wisdom where it has trascended complacency and acknowledges the quest for knowledge is neverending. I am in awe of it.
Also, that's a baller sun.
>>GroaningGreyAgony
>>Zaid Val'Roa
You two:
Are the best. I mean, the best. Looking through the gallery for the first time, I got three different story ideas--bam!--just like that!
Mike
>>Zaid Val'Roa
You two:
Are the best. I mean, the best. Looking through the gallery for the first time, I got three different story ideas--bam!--just like that!
Mike
Don't think you'll get away with this one, artist. -_- I see that horse head in the back and this is not a horse round...
In all seriousness, the style fits well with this one. Especially the crayon jet trail. I like that touch. Sure looks like fun!
In all seriousness, the style fits well with this one. Especially the crayon jet trail. I like that touch. Sure looks like fun!
If a party doesn't end with a skeleton wearing a hat, can it really be said you're partying?
The fun has been fractaled! Or this is a glimpse into an alternate teeth dimension. She is all mouth and she must smile.
Tier: Zn+1
Tier: Zn+1
Fortunately, at least one set of teeth was left over from the previous artwork. The colors are having so much fun that they are escaping the lines and people are starting to transform into fireworks, fighter jets, and horses. Too much fun to be safe.
Tier: F-22
Tier: F-22
The enigmatic robot squats Buddha-like, encouraging you to press the Mu-button. The sun may disassemble into two sets of pieces which can be reassembled into two full suns, ala Banach-Tarski. Even so, no more illumination may be shed upon the central problem.
Tier:Vintage
Tier:Vintage
The clipart causes temporary duplication of the present, and not even the Excellent Prismatic Spray can disperse the concentrated multiplicity.
Tier: Weebstep
Tier: Weebstep
Linux user rises from the beyond to debate distros with you.
Tier: ddrescue -f /dev/hades /dev/corpus
Tier: ddrescue -f /dev/hades /dev/corpus
What is a Skeleton's favorite snack? Probs should bring spare ribs to this party...
Love the brick in the background and the lighting. Makes it seem like an underground club where a standup comedian would be doing their routine.
Love the brick in the background and the lighting. Makes it seem like an underground club where a standup comedian would be doing their routine.
Robot voice: Fun? What is this fun you speak of?
Seems like 20 questions to me, is it? I may be completely off. Altogether, I like the relation to the prompt, you, the human are having fun playing with the robot, but the robot doesn't have fun, because fun is beyond their comprehension. Kinda makes you feel hollow, doesn't it?
...Or I may be overanalyzing... lol
Seems like 20 questions to me, is it? I may be completely off. Altogether, I like the relation to the prompt, you, the human are having fun playing with the robot, but the robot doesn't have fun, because fun is beyond their comprehension. Kinda makes you feel hollow, doesn't it?
...Or I may be overanalyzing... lol
Psychadelic! (I hope I'm spelling that correct... or the alternate... it's not a word and I'm the one having problems).
I wonder, how many different smiles did you use to make this one? Also, I wonder what program/tool was used to fractal this? (If you don't want to say, then I understand, a good magician never reveals their tricks).
I wonder, how many different smiles did you use to make this one? Also, I wonder what program/tool was used to fractal this? (If you don't want to say, then I understand, a good magician never reveals their tricks).
I wonder what they are listening to? Caramelladansen (I know, I butchered the name, I'm not well-versed in Weeb just yet.) might be it.
Fairly simple, but simple I like! The strobe lights are cleverly put it, and upon closer look, you can see some hidden, just like if you were in the room with them!
Fairly simple, but simple I like! The strobe lights are cleverly put it, and upon closer look, you can see some hidden, just like if you were in the room with them!
To add on GGA's post, string theory!
Kitty loves it, you can see it right in their expression! That, plus the yarn is a nice touch (I can't draw tangles like that to save my life, except a scribbly ball).
Now, the problem is getting untangled... hmm...
Kitty loves it, you can see it right in their expression! That, plus the yarn is a nice touch (I can't draw tangles like that to save my life, except a scribbly ball).
Now, the problem is getting untangled... hmm...
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Post it anyway!
Put it in a Google Doc and put the link in the comments here! Rebel against that tyrant, Time!
Mike
Post it anyway!
Put it in a Google Doc and put the link in the comments here! Rebel against that tyrant, Time!
Mike
Nobody's going to contribute reviews?
It's a good idea for your first sentence to have a fair amount of focus so it's only trying to communicate one clear image. There is an acronym you sometimes see for what kinds of things a first sentence ought to contain: SADS. That stands for setting, action, dialogue, statement. It's possible to do all 4, but you normally want to focus on 1 or 2 of those and let any of the others that appear be fleeting. You're doing all 4, but it lingers on them all quite a bit, that by the end of it, I'm not sure which of those pieces you want to stick in my head most. It's rare that rambly first sentences work that well, and I think this one's trying to do too much.
It's not until your third paragraph that it's apparent who holds the perspective. Once I do know, it's not that the first two don't work from Rose's viewpoint. It's just that I can't tell it's hers until then. The first is pretty neutral. The second sounds more like it's Charnikov, since it talks to what he likes about her. That's information he'd readily have, but I don't know enough about her yet to judge whether she'd know it. I think it'd help if you made it clearer in paragraph 1 who's going to hold the viewpoint.
Authors routinely use "that's" as past tense, but it isn't. There are a couple of other typos I see, but you'll no doubt catch them yourself.
I can't help but hear Charnikov's dialogue in King of Demons' voice from The Owl House.
Interesting choice to name the cat after a bird's body part.
There's no doubt who wrote this, as it has your usual whimsical look at a mix of adorable and unsavory characters. It's as cute as I would have expected.
It's a good idea for your first sentence to have a fair amount of focus so it's only trying to communicate one clear image. There is an acronym you sometimes see for what kinds of things a first sentence ought to contain: SADS. That stands for setting, action, dialogue, statement. It's possible to do all 4, but you normally want to focus on 1 or 2 of those and let any of the others that appear be fleeting. You're doing all 4, but it lingers on them all quite a bit, that by the end of it, I'm not sure which of those pieces you want to stick in my head most. It's rare that rambly first sentences work that well, and I think this one's trying to do too much.
It's not until your third paragraph that it's apparent who holds the perspective. Once I do know, it's not that the first two don't work from Rose's viewpoint. It's just that I can't tell it's hers until then. The first is pretty neutral. The second sounds more like it's Charnikov, since it talks to what he likes about her. That's information he'd readily have, but I don't know enough about her yet to judge whether she'd know it. I think it'd help if you made it clearer in paragraph 1 who's going to hold the viewpoint.
At least, she assumed that's what he'd done.
Authors routinely use "that's" as past tense, but it isn't. There are a couple of other typos I see, but you'll no doubt catch them yourself.
I can't help but hear Charnikov's dialogue in King of Demons' voice from The Owl House.
Interesting choice to name the cat after a bird's body part.
There's no doubt who wrote this, as it has your usual whimsical look at a mix of adorable and unsavory characters. It's as cute as I would have expected.
>>Pascoite
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Thanks, folks!
My other writing group said they'd like a little more at the end, too, so I'll sharpen up the top and the bottom and see if I can't get someone to give me some money for it!
Mike
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Thanks, folks!
My other writing group said they'd like a little more at the end, too, so I'll sharpen up the top and the bottom and see if I can't get someone to give me some money for it!
Mike