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Not only does this have a ton of writing potential, it's also mildly funny. Pretty nice. I'd give it a thumbs up.
Only real complaint is that you missed the opportunity for an even more extravagant background than just the copy-pasted bar of poison joke. However, I still have to say that you sort of reached a weird background state, so I guess it sorta works.
Only real complaint is that you missed the opportunity for an even more extravagant background than just the copy-pasted bar of poison joke. However, I still have to say that you sort of reached a weird background state, so I guess it sorta works.
Review—
Prompt relevance: moderate
Style: show style, clean
Background: that’s a lot of layered poison joke
Story potential: high (like, tooootally high)
Result: strong contender
I can’t stop to review this! This is batpony country!
Lots of potential for drug trips, though I don’t know if I consider that “pretending.”
>>Hap
Pretty sure it is
Prompt relevance: moderate
Style: show style, clean
Background: that’s a lot of layered poison joke
Story potential: high (like, tooootally high)
Result: strong contender
I can’t stop to review this! This is batpony country!
Lots of potential for drug trips, though I don’t know if I consider that “pretending.”
>>Hap
Pretty sure it is
(Art) Genre: 420
(Art) Thoughts: dat face. I mean, the whole concept here is funny, but it's really the face that sells the whole thing. Well, that and the presence of the Lichtenstein-esque caption. At that point the other details almost don't matter; it succeeds at being humorous.
Ah, but those details. The caption is mildly funky on grammar. The background is distractingly copypasta'd. And as someone else noted elsewhere (maybe in Discord?), Poison Joke isn't a hallucinogen. So unfortunately this has some strikes against it.
I'm glad this showed up here, though. I got a solid laugh out of it. And hey, three stories? That ain't bad.
(Art Tier): Medium
(Art) Thoughts: dat face. I mean, the whole concept here is funny, but it's really the face that sells the whole thing. Well, that and the presence of the Lichtenstein-esque caption. At that point the other details almost don't matter; it succeeds at being humorous.
Ah, but those details. The caption is mildly funky on grammar. The background is distractingly copypasta'd. And as someone else noted elsewhere (maybe in Discord?), Poison Joke isn't a hallucinogen. So unfortunately this has some strikes against it.
I'm glad this showed up here, though. I got a solid laugh out of it. And hey, three stories? That ain't bad.
(Art Tier): Medium
Altered states. I hope something fun is going on down there. Background could have been less linear. Mid tier.
>>Kritten
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Actually, at first I planned to blur the background till it was no longer recognisable, just a mass of blue with occasional flower sticking out.
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Actually, at first I planned to blur the background till it was no longer recognisable, just a mass of blue with occasional flower sticking out.