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Silver medal
The Darkest Hour
FiM Short Story
2nd
95%
560
Time Enough For Wub
Mortarboard
True Colors
FiM Short Story
5th
79%
429
Bra Quest!
Ribbon
Has That Always Been There?
FiM Short Story
5th
78%
417
Petunia and the Coelacanth
Ribbon
It's Your Funeral
FiM Minific
6th
92%
226
The Power of Love
Ribbon
Out of Time
FiM Short Story
17th
53%
219
Mistress of the Dark
Ribbon
Just Like Old Times
FiM Minific
4th
86%
194
An Apple Asunder
Ribbon
It Could Have Gone Better
FiM Minific
10th
76%
165
Technical Ecstasy (or: Party Princess Shining Bright)
Confetti
The Morning After
FiM Minific
14th
73%
155
A Night (Not) to Remember
Ribbon
Ship It
FiM Minific
6th
71%
139
It's No Good
Ribbon
Things Left Unsaid
FiM Minific
25th
67%
134
Still Waiting
#17584 · 12
· · >>Zaid Val'Roa >>Moosetasm
Poni?

...

Poni.
#8021 · 11
· · >>Trick_Question
>>horizon
blah blah no time blah blah


Calling it now: horizon writes for one hour, still takes bronze.
#16844 · 10
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>>Fenton
ot.
#17592 · 10
· · >>Hap
So I don't want to stank things up too much with personal stuff, but I guess I'll do a little: I've not been in the best place with my anxiety for the last few of these, which has limited and/or skewed my participation. My goals for this one are (1) just to participate, and (2) to do so from a place of deeper authenticity.
#13770 · 9
· · >>Fenton
A brief note for the new folks:

Welcome! Thank you for submitting your story. I'm sure I'm speaking for everyone when I say we're glad to have you here.

Now that the stories are in, people tend to go through and offer reviews and/or criticism. Just as there are different kinds of stories, so there are different kinds of feedback. The goal is typically to keep this constructive and useful, though be aware that sometimes that doesn't happen.

Feel free to contribute feedback if you want! Be aware that others are doing so as well. Whatever you do, please make sure not to compromise your anonymity until your story shows up with your name next to it in the Gallery. There's no special notification of whether your story made it to finals or not, other than to check that view.

Also be aware that the Writeoff tends to draw some very established and talented participants, so please don't get discouraged no matter how things turn out. Someone's going to have to come in last place no matter how strong the field may be. Competing for Horse Points (TM) is certainly diverting, but the more important thing is to keep growing as an author.

Now get out there and start reading & voting!
#15234 · 9
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>>horizon
must... not write... story called... Alicorn Butt Crisis Armageddon 1/2...
#16094 · 8
· · >>Trick_Question >>Cold in Gardez
Hey guys! IMO this prompt is a great opportunity to advance the concept of being a bit lenient with stories that don't line up with it in a super-obvious way. That is unless we all want to read stories about:

1) Ponies/Technicolor Humans Lying
2) Rivers
3) Ponies/Technicolor Humans Lying While Traversing Rivers

I know this isn't rocket science and most people are probably cool with this anyway, but I feel like it's worth putting out there for discussion, as I could see this prompt being somewhat restrictive otherwise.
#16850 · 8
· · >>Fenton
Oh hey, I just realized that this doesn't reflect the updated word length for Minis that got talked about a couple months back. Was that still going to be the plan, or was there follow-up about it not happening after all?

EDIT: le context
#17950 · 8
· · >>Bachiavellian
Mashups incoming in 3... 2... 1...


Thank You For Imported Marital Aids: A merry mix-up (and significant property damage) ensues when Sunset and Starlight are summoned to bring "new and unusual toys" to Shiny and Cady's chambers. After first surviving, and then firing their new communications director, the royal couple give Twilight the bad news: they don't have bandwidth to help put together Horse-MENSA welcome bags after all.

The Catsitter of Hoofholt: In a world... where dragons rule the land... one mare... and an army of Daedric cats... make with the Fus! Roh! Dah!

This Is The Big Important Wizard: After Cherry strikes out with Sunburst, Raindrops steps up to bat, and rolls a natural 20 on her Flirt check...

Summer Palaver 1008: All Starlight wanted was a nice cup of tea with princess Luna. All she got was a masquerading Discord calling her a "retard." And all she could do, in the end, was leave him a bad Yelp review.
#22481 · 8
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Greetings friends, and welcome to the inaugural contest of Friendship is Short Shorts! I’ll be your host for tonight’s entertainment. Most of you know me—my name’s CoffeeMinion—and a lot of you have heard my sales pitch for why it makes sense to have alternate lengths for FiM contests.

“But CoffeeMinion,” someone’s bound to say, “I haven’t heard the sales pitch!”

Let me do it for you this way: everybody knows there are three parts to writing a Minific entry, right? The first part is brainstorming it, the second part is actually writing it—but the third part is taking a hacksaw and cutting things out of it to try to get your perfectly functional 1100-word story down to 750 words so that you can submit it.

Or maybe the writing part doesn’t resonate for you. “Surely I have not had trouble fitting my Minifics into 750 words,” some of you say. All right, fair enough—but what about all those minis you’ve reviewed where 9/10ths of the feedback looks like: “Wow, this has some great potential, but it feels really compressed / the conclusion is rushed / it needs another scene / etc.” Wouldn’t it be more enjoyable to read a slate of stories that aren’t all overstuffed?

“Now hold on Mr. ‘Coffee Minion,’ if that’s even your real name,” a few are bound to protest. “Surely you can’t fix the problem of people overstuffing their stories just by adding more words? Surely they’ll still push the limit, regardless of whether that’s 750 or 1250. The fundamental problem is that people need to be telling stories that work with the word count, not against it.”

To which I say: “Stop calling me Shirley THAT’S WHERE YOU COME IN!

I would argue that the FimFiction community in general, as well as the FiM Writeoff community, has amply demonstrated their ability to write toward a “sweet spot” of 1000 words where the stories are both short and satisfying. And yes, let’s address the elephant in the room: that’s also the minimum publishability threshold for standalone FimFiction stories, which also motivates my views. But I’d argue that 1000 truly does work well as a target unto itself. We’re collectively brilliant at Minifics, except inasmuch as we generally end up cutting and cramming at the end—so why not take that basic concept and just relive a bit of pressure at the upper end?

Here’s the thing, though: I could be wrong. Maybe everyone really will just plaster themselves up against a higher limit, and the stories won’t be any better.

But I don’t think that’s going to happen. I think everyone who participates will have the chance to spread their wings a little more and write some flank-kicking short shorts. And I think they’ll also enjoy it more on the back-end when the higher limit makes it that much easier to transplant these stories from the Writeoff site to FimFiction.

I think it’ll be a win-win for everybody.

But to make it happen, I need your stories, your comments, and your reviews. You guys already know how to make a Writeoff awesome; please join me now in making this one awesome!