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They Stood Against the Sky · Original Short Story ·
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#1 · 1
· · >>Anon Y Mous
I like the concept of this image. "There's Space for love" is also a good line. Let aliens on Earth!
#2 · 1
· · >>Moosetasm >>Anon Y Mous
The unbalanced number of signs is bothering me more than it should. :/

I really don't have a lot to say here. You obviously have better art skills than me; you've grasped your idea, outlined its scope, and evoked it cleanly.

...well, that one sign on the far left looks kinda like a cooked alien to me...
#3 · 1
· · >>Anon Y Mous
Nice, feel-good picture, with a potential for conflict.

I like how you used the colors to imply emotion for each side.

>>Not_A_Hat
It mirrors life too closely methinks.
#4 · 1
· · >>Anon Y Mous
I detect some social commentary with this one.

I like the contrasting colors, and this leaves more than enough room for a good story, even if it looks like it was drawn by a child, albeit a very talented child.
#5 ·
· · >>Anon Y Mous
You could have profitably put just a little more effort into showing us that this is a crowd of people. As it was, I had to think about it for a second or two. Just drawing some people at the periphery or showing some arms and hands grasping the banner would have helped.

Aside from that, this does a decent job at conveying its idea.
#6 · 2
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>>Roseluck
>>Not_A_Hat
>>Moosetasm
>>No_Raisin
>>GroaningGreyAgony

I detect some social commentary with this one.


Well, you know, social commentary is best served passive aggressively. ;)

The unbalanced number of signs is bothering me more than it should. :/


I fully agree with you, as I was making this picture I thought to myself, 'does... does this matter? I mean, I'm thinking about it now so-- nah...' and went about my business.

...well, that one sign on the far left looks kinda like a cooked alien to me...


That's pretty funny.

You could have profitably put just a little more effort into showing us that this is a crowd of people. As it was, I had to think about it for a second or two. Just drawing some people at the periphery or showing some arms and hands grasping the banner would have helped.


Drawing people sucks, though... :'(