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Petition to give snails their natural born rights.
πππππ§‘β€οΈHappy Valentineβs Day!β€οΈπ§‘ππππ
πYou guys are special
πUnique
πAnd beautiful
Take a heart, theyβre free to give:
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πYou guys are special
πUnique
πAnd beautiful
Take a heart, theyβre free to give:
ππππππππππππππππβ€οΈππβ£οΈπππππππππππππβ€οΈπππππππβ€οΈππππβ€οΈππππ§‘ππ
>>GaPJaxie
>>Dubs_Rewatcher
>>GroaningGreyAgony
>>Bachiavellian
>>Miller Minus
Yay! Thank you guys so much for the praise. I can't express how much I appreciate it. Also, I realize that I'm not as anonymous as my username might suggest, lol. I just wanted you guys to have a picture you could gain inspiration from. Also, sorry if there's any spelling mistakes. I'm typing furiously in class right now. I'm so honored so many stories were based off of my art. Thank you guys again. <3
GGA gosh darn it. I wanted to keep anonymous. Shhhhhhhhh...
Miller. I was laughing so hard when I saw your comment. When I lined the picture I realized the horn was off and my eye was drawn to it every single time I opened the picture. Thanks for the critique, though. :P
>>Dubs_Rewatcher
>>GroaningGreyAgony
>>Bachiavellian
>>Miller Minus
Yay! Thank you guys so much for the praise. I can't express how much I appreciate it. Also, I realize that I'm not as anonymous as my username might suggest, lol. I just wanted you guys to have a picture you could gain inspiration from. Also, sorry if there's any spelling mistakes. I'm typing furiously in class right now. I'm so honored so many stories were based off of my art. Thank you guys again. <3
GGA gosh darn it. I wanted to keep anonymous. Shhhhhhhhh...
Miller. I was laughing so hard when I saw your comment. When I lined the picture I realized the horn was off and my eye was drawn to it every single time I opened the picture. Thanks for the critique, though. :P
This was very moving, although having a lot of format and misspelling errors, it was still beautiful.
Iβll brush over the fact that most (all?) of the sentences do not actually have a capital letter on the first word. I think it might be a style choice because Catra DESPISES change and its eventual end whether she likes it or not- almost as much as I do- and the story reflects that by not having any capital letters.
Maybe Iβm thinking too much into it.
This poem has prose, much unlike me, and it is perfect. Itβs not trying too hard to be poetic, it just is. Well done, author.
Lastly the actual moral/takeaway of the story isnβt hard to find and molds well with the story. In other words nothing felt shoehorned in.
Welp. This is my review. 10/10 sad Catras. Thanks for the read. ;)
Iβll brush over the fact that most (all?) of the sentences do not actually have a capital letter on the first word. I think it might be a style choice because Catra DESPISES change and its eventual end whether she likes it or not- almost as much as I do- and the story reflects that by not having any capital letters.
Maybe Iβm thinking too much into it.
This poem has prose, much unlike me, and it is perfect. Itβs not trying too hard to be poetic, it just is. Well done, author.
Lastly the actual moral/takeaway of the story isnβt hard to find and molds well with the story. In other words nothing felt shoehorned in.
Welp. This is my review. 10/10 sad Catras. Thanks for the read. ;)
IVE FIGURED OUT THE PUZZLE
00111111 reflected is 11111100
That makes the letter ΓΌ
Author, when you read this, I hope you know that I hate you.
00111111 reflected is 11111100
That makes the letter ΓΌ
Author, when you read this, I hope you know that I hate you.
I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who has participated in the first-ever poetry contest! Whether it was reviewing or writing or both, you guys have been a great help. It has been a blast. I was so nervous that everything would go wrong, but thanks to you guys, it went perfectly.
Donβt forget to guess who you think wrote what and donβt forget to vote!
Until next time. <3
Donβt forget to guess who you think wrote what and donβt forget to vote!
Until next time. <3