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>>GroaningGreyAgony
Hey GGA :-) thanks for the review! I’ve been meaning to get to this. It’s not vector art- 100% home made procreate art. I had a lot of fun with this one
Hey GGA :-) thanks for the review! I’ve been meaning to get to this. It’s not vector art- 100% home made procreate art. I had a lot of fun with this one
Genre: “That sucks bro”
I’m not one for purple prose, but I think this did it very well.
There’s not much to say. The imagination and creativity that went into this fic is spectacular and this take on grief is definitely one of my favorites. I’m sorry this review is so short. I’m kind of out of it.
Overall, very nice. <3
I’m not one for purple prose, but I think this did it very well.
There’s not much to say. The imagination and creativity that went into this fic is spectacular and this take on grief is definitely one of my favorites. I’m sorry this review is so short. I’m kind of out of it.
Overall, very nice. <3
>>Miller Minus
Alright. I know we’re all memein’
But I’m pretty excited to see where this turns out.
Good luck cause y’all r gonna need it >:)
Alright. I know we’re all memein’
But I’m pretty excited to see where this turns out.
Good luck cause y’all r gonna need it >:)
Genre: Human
I’m having a hard time piecing what’s actually going on at the end, author. I get that uncle coney (great name by the way) is against his wife killing people one at a time, but I don’t quite understand the rest of what was happening with uncle manny. Is uncle manny trying to kill his granddaughter? Is coney actually manny? I have no clue. Probably a me problem to be honest.
I don’t really like the last two paragraphs, but I don’t see how it could end much differently.
Finally, the last thing to nag about is the human element. It felt too human, yknow? I didn’t really appreciate all of the extra details to her life as much as I thought I would in theory. It just felt like we were shoving in random words to make her feel more human than her actual actions.
All of these things I’ve nagged about doesn’t mean it’s a bad story by all means. I like the more upbeatness of the story and how fucking amazing uncle coney is. He is my favorite character 100%. Best character of the round. I could’ve listened to the two banter for hours, honestly, but I don’t have time for that.
All in all a pretty good story. Good luck! :3
I’m having a hard time piecing what’s actually going on at the end, author. I get that uncle coney (great name by the way) is against his wife killing people one at a time, but I don’t quite understand the rest of what was happening with uncle manny. Is uncle manny trying to kill his granddaughter? Is coney actually manny? I have no clue. Probably a me problem to be honest.
I don’t really like the last two paragraphs, but I don’t see how it could end much differently.
Finally, the last thing to nag about is the human element. It felt too human, yknow? I didn’t really appreciate all of the extra details to her life as much as I thought I would in theory. It just felt like we were shoving in random words to make her feel more human than her actual actions.
All of these things I’ve nagged about doesn’t mean it’s a bad story by all means. I like the more upbeatness of the story and how fucking amazing uncle coney is. He is my favorite character 100%. Best character of the round. I could’ve listened to the two banter for hours, honestly, but I don’t have time for that.
All in all a pretty good story. Good luck! :3
If anyone is still looking here.....
I wanted to say thank you to Coffee and Bachi for their comments on the art! It was very much appreciated. <<3 Ironically ‘To Grandmother’s House’ was the one I was dreading to do the most.
I only wanted to do one or two, but then I wanted to do three or four and by that time I knew that I had to do all of them.
I’ll address some concerns you guys may have had. I’m sorry to shatter hoof for having such a bad cover! I wanted to make it true to a comic, but the lines turned out soooooo bad. And I didn’t even get the font that I wanted. The text options didn’t have it :((
Also! For The Sink or Swim one I did reference the picture of Ophelia as Sunset. I’m glad Delusionalism caught it. In the back left is the tub which is concealed by a transparent curtain. Top right is a door opening, and in the front is the phone next to a towel on the sink.
My favorite one to do was the first one, Chill Vibes. Ahhh. So calming.
I wanted to say thank you to Coffee and Bachi for their comments on the art! It was very much appreciated. <<3 Ironically ‘To Grandmother’s House’ was the one I was dreading to do the most.
I only wanted to do one or two, but then I wanted to do three or four and by that time I knew that I had to do all of them.
I’ll address some concerns you guys may have had. I’m sorry to shatter hoof for having such a bad cover! I wanted to make it true to a comic, but the lines turned out soooooo bad. And I didn’t even get the font that I wanted. The text options didn’t have it :((
Also! For The Sink or Swim one I did reference the picture of Ophelia as Sunset. I’m glad Delusionalism caught it. In the back left is the tub which is concealed by a transparent curtain. Top right is a door opening, and in the front is the phone next to a towel on the sink.
My favorite one to do was the first one, Chill Vibes. Ahhh. So calming.
I disagree that the tone switches from comical to serious are bad. I love them and think they are a welcome addition to the piece which makes it wonderful in its own way.
I loved the idea and I love the image of his dad picking him up like a football and charging through everyone.
I loved the idea and I love the image of his dad picking him up like a football and charging through everyone.
>>Bachiavellian
My prompt’s got three votes and it definitely is not the same as the rest.
My prompt’s got three votes and it definitely is not the same as the rest.
>>No_Raisin
>>Bachiavellian
>>GroaningGreyAgony
When I first started this piece, I was just messing around with the brush and had a great idea.
I put a lot more time into this picture than you might think because I fucked up the red dots and their angles so many times. I’m still not completely happy with it, but I’m not going back and fixing it again any time soon lol.
>>Bachiavellian
>>GroaningGreyAgony
When I first started this piece, I was just messing around with the brush and had a great idea.
I put a lot more time into this picture than you might think because I fucked up the red dots and their angles so many times. I’m still not completely happy with it, but I’m not going back and fixing it again any time soon lol.
>>No_Raisin
>>Bachiavellian
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Thanks for gold!
Legit the only reason this was crooked is because I didn’t want to make the devil any smaller.
Also, I kind of liked just the line art as it was, but I can wholeheartedly see how you want more meat to the picture. ;3
>>Bachiavellian
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Thanks for gold!
Legit the only reason this was crooked is because I didn’t want to make the devil any smaller.
Also, I kind of liked just the line art as it was, but I can wholeheartedly see how you want more meat to the picture. ;3
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