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Hiding in Plain Sight · Original Minific ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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#1 · 1
· · >>Filler >>TheRiverSings
This is a gorgeous piece. How does this not have any comments? Q_Q
#2 · 2
· · >>TheRiverSings
None of the art did until you commented. Congrats, and spread the love! ^^
#3 · 2
· · >>TheRiverSings
This is my fav piece out of the art comp! I love the cool purple tones you added to compliment the warmness of the rest of the piece and the emotion overall is serene and reserved. The hints of sculpting on the face are also very nice, I quite like the softness of her expression.
My only gripes come from anatomy that doesn't feel intentional, mainly in the shoulders and pelvis. The arm under her has no imaginable connection point to her body and the other is fighting to have the shape you gave it. My advice is to think of the shoulders as a line or V and remember that they are connected. The thigh gap also comes across as awkward to me, in this kind of pose it's unlikely one would be present. ( If its meant to be hair, sorry ! It reads as a gap ! )
Human figures are hard and you did a nice job !
#4 · 4

Thanks so much for the feedback.
Proportions are the bane of my existence.. I really need to work on them!

It feels good to be back in 'draw-off' again