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Stars in the Sea, Waves in the Sky · Poetry Minific ·
Organised by Anon Y Mous
Word limit 15–1000
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#1 ·
· on Dosido
Free verse, more or less, so no comments on structure.

I like the personification and the word choices here. The one that threw me a bit is I didn't know if "intent" was used twice intentionally to make a thematic point. I couldn't find a purpose to it, so I'll assume the poet didn't notice.
#2 ·
· on Horizon Mirror
Nice use of imagery to illustrate the prompt. Haiku are pretty uncomplicated, so no particular comments. It satisfies all the structural rules.
#3 ·
· on Surprise
Seems like a sonnet, but the fifth and fourteenth lines have twelve syllables. I've seen "female rhyme," where you can have an unstressed eleventh syllable on the end (and the line rhymed with it should do the same), but I haven't heard of this before. And please/lease doesn't quite rhyme. On "lease," is there an extraneous period after it, or did you mean that to be an ellipsis?

I think I get the picture of what's being described. An antiquated collection of buildings that captures the speaker's interest, in contrast with the modern world around it. It's vividly described, and I like the mental picture it creates.