Hey! It looks like you're new here. You might want to check out the introduction.

Stars in the Sea, Waves in the Sky · Poetry Minific ·
Organised by Anon Y Mous
Word limit 15–1000
Show rules for this event
Horizon Mirror
The thin line, Earth's edge,
Where the star spiked river flows,
Mingled with sea foam.
« Prev   3   Next »
Pascoite
Pascoite
#1 ·
·
Nice use of imagery to illustrate the prompt. Haiku are pretty uncomplicated, so no particular comments. It satisfies all the structural rules.