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>>Monokeras
First of all, thanks for commenting on all these stories.
Wrote this in a hour and half because I had a stupid idea pop in my head that I made me smile. I didn't run out of words or fuel per say because I wanted to get a certain word count - 666. Yeah... I need grow up but I found it funny. If the word count limit was 800, I would have bumped it up to 777. Because some times I can't help myself even though I should have focused on time itself instead.
Yeah, you are right on a lot of things I bet. Mostly Flam here doesn't sound like himself too much and the lack of his brother to play off the dialog really hurts this scene. At least to me my work this seemed like a story.
First of all, thanks for commenting on all these stories.
Wrote this in a hour and half because I had a stupid idea pop in my head that I made me smile. I didn't run out of words or fuel per say because I wanted to get a certain word count - 666. Yeah... I need grow up but I found it funny. If the word count limit was 800, I would have bumped it up to 777. Because some times I can't help myself even though I should have focused on time itself instead.
Yeah, you are right on a lot of things I bet. Mostly Flam here doesn't sound like himself too much and the lack of his brother to play off the dialog really hurts this scene. At least to me my work this seemed like a story.
This poem reminds me of those memes that go in a circle. Problem, solution, another problem, another solution that leads to the first problem.
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Oh. I didn't see this as a riddle. I just thought it was supposed to be poetic. If this was a riddle I had to answer at a door, I would just get a buddy and we would kick it in at the same time. Anyhow, again, I liked this a lot.
Oh. I didn't see this as a riddle. I just thought it was supposed to be poetic. If this was a riddle I had to answer at a door, I would just get a buddy and we would kick it in at the same time. Anyhow, again, I liked this a lot.
This is really competent and looks cool. It doesn't roll off my tongue too well. It's topical right now but I'm not getting the feel of the prompt from this one.
This is pretty smartly put together. Something I would see myself singing out loud. Like the ABAB CD style.
I've been too busy getting my shit together and dealing with other people's issues last month and now this month. Poor excuse but that's true enough.
>>Dubs_Rewatcher
Give me a ring a ding, ding when it's done. I always interested in where tangents from these contests will led.
Give me a ring a ding, ding when it's done. I always interested in where tangents from these contests will led.
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