Stunning use of colors and the way our eyes move throughout the page is elegant. A nice little touch is the border. Well done. The apple wave is expertly done, but it contrasts badly with the half done pony face.

Just a little touch up on her face would do, maybe add a nose and more detail to the mouth. 🍎

Great Halloween theme there, buddy. I especially like the color choices and the frenetic strokes you produced to make it work. The volume and distance and a sense of heat and nightmarish despair. It would work well as the author's cover.

Is that Mt. Fuji in the background? :)
The scribbly style works in favor of the impressionistic nature of this piece. The negative space forming a fist-of-god aimed at AJ’s head may or may not be intentional, but once seen can’t be unseen. A nice reference to the story and a good piece in its own right.
Upper tier, but in this round, something is going to have to go lower…

I like that there's no black or white here. The colored outlines on colored objects with a colored background really gives the whole thing a dreamlike, smudged feeling, for lack of my ability to come up with a better term. It's also a cool bit of perspective play that you've framed the shot so that Applejack appears upright while the house is the one that's tilted.Really cool stuff!