This screams “tee hee.”
I definitely want to see the bottle or maybe a hoof rubbing something in... to the wing.

This sketch, by itself, doesn't immediately seem to relate to the story. Moosetasm had a good point. Judging this just as a drawing of Cadence, I'd say she's adorable. Her wing, however, seems somewhat odd and kinda small. It's an anatomy nit pick. I have a few anatomy nit picks, like how the headshape looks, the hoof, the ear placement, but the anatomy isn't really important here I suppose. It's not a major focus of the drawing.
Cute picture, overall.

This is definitely cute, but unfortunately it didn't really grab me. It does come across as a little static to me. Maybe the other two reviewers are on to something, about how the picture doesn't show the hot sauce or its effects. Still, I definitely don't dislike it.

Cute expression and pose; half assed wings.

If it seems like I’m being terse with some of these reviews, please consider them to be reflecting the Artist’s approach to this round.

Aw, she's so cute! Thanks so much for illustrating my story!