This captures the characters, but a more downward angle on twilight would have implied more to her depressed state, as well as if we could see tears or something else.

I'm automatically going to like this one just because it's for my story. Thank you so much for giving every entry a piece!

I think the use of perspective here is grand. Despite the simple arrangement of the items in view, you can clearly tell where everything is in space. And plus, I can't help but to giggle and think that this is 1st person Celestia, who's laying face-on-the-floor.

It's also really easy to distinguish the shapes from one another, despite the sketchiness. For instance, Celestia's hoof remains distinct from her glass. How you managed that, I have no damn clue. Nice stuff!

I like the sketchiness of this picture. I think it fits the mood. The point of view is pretty good too.

The drawing might benefit from some hatching of some kind. The mood can be conveyed better if there was a shadow. I also think the perspective would make more sense if the surface that the glasses were resting on was more leveled.

Nice, though. It's good work.

Good on expressions, Artist; you clearly have experience in drawing ponies. Bad on polish. I’m going to be saying this about a lot of this artist’s entries.