Ok, they seem... creepy here... which is appropriate to the fic. Cutie-Mark-Crusader 1984! ... ... Yay!

Aww! I love this one! Sweetiebelle's(?) hair is really nice and swoopy.

The only problem I have is that Applebloom(?) seems oddly larger or closer and it seems unintentional.

I am deeply disturbed due to not knowing where Scootaloo is.

I would gladly trust Sweetie Belle with my social security number

>>Zaid Val'Roa
Considering this story’s dystopian future; at the Rainbow Factory.

I love their little business suits. It's the perfect blend of cute and off-putting to see a little child-pony wearing one. Apple Bloom's eyes are great, and as for Sweetie Belle, I'll quote the girl herself and say "I really like her mane!".

“Excuse me, Ma’am, do you have a moment to talk about Twilight Sparkle the Redeemer?”

The drawing is a bit rough, but has a good D’aww factor.