The emotions are very clear, the two main characters are shown. Hello, top contender for this artist. :rainbowkiss:

I really like how you silhouetted out Wind shear. It puts the focus on Raindrops very well, despite him being in the foreground. I also love your choice of perspective, making it from the view of the unnamed stallion that Raindrops was distracted by. As for Raindrops herself, I'll be honest and say that when I first saw the picture I thought it was Derpy. But I think it would have been tough to differentiate the two, considering they have identical designs outside of color and cutie mark, so I'll give you a Get Out of Jail Free card for that.

Pony meets angry scribbleblob atop a cloud.

>>Bachiavellian

As for Raindrops herself, I'll be honest and say that when I first saw the picture I thought it was Derpy. But I think it would have been tough to differentiate the two, considering they have identical designs outside of color and cutie mark

I noticed that too... it's really hard to draw ponies without the use of color, since so much of their design relies on it.
But maybe partially my fault too because I messed up her face a little.