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This one's got a cleaner look to it than the other sketches, and I like the extra details it affords to Sunset's mane and tears.. Sunset's face strikes me a s a little too wide for her snout to me, though. And it took me a second to realize that she was seated at her desk; I almost mistook her desk for her body. I doing something like showing her hooves or more of her torso might make it easier to get a sense of her posture.