The emotion shows through, and the title is conveniently on screen as well. Definitely needed a little more line work done. I’d give this an A... minus.

This one's got a cleaner look to it than the other sketches, and I like the extra details it affords to Sunset's mane and tears.. Sunset's face strikes me a s a little too wide for her snout to me, though. And it took me a second to realize that she was seated at her desk; I almost mistook her desk for her body. I doing something like showing her hooves or more of her torso might make it easier to get a sense of her posture.

Another draft image, lacking polish.

My reaction to this picture was, "Aw..."

And I showed it to two of my friends who had also read the story and they said, "Aw..."

The expression is done so well and it captures such... "Aw..."

Thank you for this sketch and for all you hard work, Haze!