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I have no idea how you managed to convey the specific look of frilly/whooshing/spiraling icing so well. (Is there an actual word for this? Help!) Going more abstract for this fic was a good call, I think. It captures the tone of the story without resorting to showing sad faces, which can sometimes feel cheap. And I love how each cupcake is different, from their shape, to their pleat, to the icing and the toppings. Nice!
The cupcakes look nice! I agree that the frosting was well drawn.
I think the orientation of the cupcakes could be a little better; they're pretty spaced apart.
I think the orientation of the cupcakes could be a little better; they're pretty spaced apart.
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I figured. I'm not saying they should be closer, but they should have a different orientation within the canvas. A slightly more dynamic angle or something. Maybe if the POV was changed so they weren't level with each other. The cupcake on the right actually does appear to be a bit higher. If this effect were exaggerated a bit more, it'd be more successful.
I should have made myself more clear in the beginning, whoopsie!
I figured. I'm not saying they should be closer, but they should have a different orientation within the canvas. A slightly more dynamic angle or something. Maybe if the POV was changed so they weren't level with each other. The cupcake on the right actually does appear to be a bit higher. If this effect were exaggerated a bit more, it'd be more successful.
I should have made myself more clear in the beginning, whoopsie!
