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WOO exactly what I needed. I've been editing so much lately I have barely had any time to write. Let's do this!
Wait, these are three days long? Oops. I misremembered. I should've tried for it! Sigh.
Friends, I am trying not to make a habit of non-participation. However, due to some family issues from the weekend into today, I will not be able to complete my entry.
a.k.a.: RL, my only weakness :-(
a.k.a.: RL, my only weakness :-(
Welp, this is awkward, but for sake of tradition, I will give it a proper sendoff through a retrospect:
Titanium:
Cool! Gold! Thank you for whoever voted! Given that it definitely wasn’t a fair fight (considering the other entrant was either a new face or an alt), it’s not quite an honorable victory, but I’m not in it for victory, I’m in it for experience and to hone my prowess.
This is one of my good ideas, not going to lie, and due to the circumstances, this round, I chose not to faux review (I mean c’mon, you got a 50-50 chance of guessing right, and those chances can be slightly jilted once you know my general game plan when it comes to my entries. I’m bad at reviewing already, so a faux-review would be practically a flag waving ‘I’m here!’. Not that it mattered anyways, no guesses were made.
No, I choose to take this elsewhere for a formal review. No fault of anyone, of course (I admit that there are times that I should be doing more for the Writeoff, instead of spamming fics). For me, this is simple enough that with a few little tweaks that this will be Fimfic worthy. My hope is to publish it in May (just setting a goal for myself).
Titanium:
Cool! Gold! Thank you for whoever voted! Given that it definitely wasn’t a fair fight (considering the other entrant was either a new face or an alt), it’s not quite an honorable victory, but I’m not in it for victory, I’m in it for experience and to hone my prowess.
This is one of my good ideas, not going to lie, and due to the circumstances, this round, I chose not to faux review (I mean c’mon, you got a 50-50 chance of guessing right, and those chances can be slightly jilted once you know my general game plan when it comes to my entries. I’m bad at reviewing already, so a faux-review would be practically a flag waving ‘I’m here!’. Not that it mattered anyways, no guesses were made.
No, I choose to take this elsewhere for a formal review. No fault of anyone, of course (I admit that there are times that I should be doing more for the Writeoff, instead of spamming fics). For me, this is simple enough that with a few little tweaks that this will be Fimfic worthy. My hope is to publish it in May (just setting a goal for myself).
To the other entrant this round, thank you for joining in! I would like to say, first and foremost, that (at least in my eyes) the prose is on point, and I can see the scene quite vividly (to tell you the truth, I was half-tempted to make a pic of it, since eggs and toothpicks are easy to come by, my only problem was nailing the faux-picture of Mayor Mare).
Starlight Glimmer is on point with this, even the mention of a deciare that can be used as a political weapon is especially juicy. It would make sense that she knows how to cause conspiracy whilst gaslighting her opponent.
In another context, this would be top tier, but due to the lack of submissions, it wasn’t able to shine. But, altogether, if you are a new face around here, welcome! If you are an alt, then well done on this!
Starlight Glimmer is on point with this, even the mention of a deciare that can be used as a political weapon is especially juicy. It would make sense that she knows how to cause conspiracy whilst gaslighting her opponent.
In another context, this would be top tier, but due to the lack of submissions, it wasn’t able to shine. But, altogether, if you are a new face around here, welcome! If you are an alt, then well done on this!
Kinda makes we want to do a blueprint version for cover art! Altogether, though, through its simplicity, the art for the piece doesn’t need to be complicated, heck, I even think that Estee used a picture of a pony’s skull with emphasis on some molars for a fic about dental work! Same can be applied here.
Well done!
Well done!
What you egg?
Stabs him
Once again, thank you GGA for the art this round. Things have gotten quiet as of late, but it’s comforting to note that people are reading the works being put out of this. Again, like I said to the other entrant, I was actually half-tempted to make an art piece of this.
Well done!
Stabs him
Once again, thank you GGA for the art this round. Things have gotten quiet as of late, but it’s comforting to note that people are reading the works being put out of this. Again, like I said to the other entrant, I was actually half-tempted to make an art piece of this.
Well done!
