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Keep Pretending · FiM Minific ·
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#1 · 2
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
Chubby vampire Celestia? Sure, I'm in.
I like the rainbow look of the mountains and the sky, though it makes me wonder if that's actually the sun or a nuclear blast.
Nevertheless, it's a cute piece.
#2 · 1
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
Review—
Prompt relevance: very
Style: clean lines, chubby subject is chubby
Background: rainbow sherbet mountains ftw
Story potential: high
Result: strong contender

I love this one. My thoughts are that this is a little filly pretending that they’re raising the sun, even though they are not. Maybe it’s Celestia, maybe it isn’t. Either way, it’s adorable.
#3 · 1
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
(Art) Genre: As Zaid said, Chubby Vampire Celestia

(Art) Thoughts: Why is her horn all crooked in the middle?! I can mostly accept the vamp-teeth as being part of the style, but the crooked horn is just bugging me to no end.

That aside, this is quite cute and pretty. I love the smooth colors that fade into each other. And Chubby Vampire Celestia needs to become a thing.

(Art Tier): High-ish
#4 · 1
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Baby tooth? It is rather pointy.
Neon colors should be toned down a bit in saturation but are not too inappropriate for a candyland like Equestria. Chubby li’l Celly is cute, and seeing her smile makes me smile. Mid-upper tier.
#5 · 1
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>>Zaid Val'Roa, >>Moosetasm, >>CoffeeMinion

First Rise

This was the first idea I sketched out and the one that I spent the most time on. For the most part, this one was a pleasant task of playing with gradient meshes in Illustrator and drawing Bezier curves over a scan of my draft sketch. A computer crash caused me to lose an hour’s work just as I thought I was done; in retrospect, it was much improved for having to redo it. Celestia’s ‘fang’ was supposed to be a baby tooth; I should have squared it off.

Thank you for your comments!