Characterizations are good, but it seems like it’s missing something.

The way that you've got lines radiating out from the corners of the window made me think that this perspective was from the inside of an oven or a box. It's a little odd, but I definitely liked the piece more when I started noticing the things like their manes, or Flutter's expressive eyes. Compared to your other entries, this one does feel a little muted in tone/intensity, but that might just be from the subject matter.

“Fluttershy, how do you get your oven so clean?”
“I… I take it out in the rain, and ask it politely.”

Thank you so much for making this Haze!!

I'm so glad you included the rain and I love her expression of sadness. <3