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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
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trixie and twilight's magnificent vanishing act
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#1 · 3
· · >>Moosetasm
Clever use of the medium; it fits the story like a glove. I love how Trixie's confidently mouthing off while she's traversing. Another favourite right here.
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>>BlueChameleonVI
Agreed on the use of color to imply transition between realities.
#3 · 1
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Different colors/thicknesses/stroke directions for different universes is a clever idea! Very well done, and I loved Trixie's expression as well! Something about it is so wonderfully smug, despite her closed eyes and brows being just a line each. A very cool piece overall!
#4 · 1
· · >>Haze
This is a neat drawing. The ideas that are implemented here are interesting and fit with the story it's based on.

It's a little mishmash-y though. The red-blue-green by itself with the black would be a bit more successful if it was in color order, maybe. (RGB, or BGR) I'm not sure. Very neat, though.
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Characters are recognizable, expressions are decent. Still a bit scribbly for my taste. It would have been nice if you’d had the time to polish it a bit more.
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>>Roseluck
I... honestly didn't even notice the RGB thing. (maybe CMYK would've been more suitable?)

This one kept haunting me afterwards because, even as a loose sketch, I kept thinking up better ideas for composition and color use. Maybe it could've been pretty decent, if I had only focused on one entry.