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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
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griswielda's fortune
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Can't quite tell what I'm looking at
#2 · 2
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I know you were trying to show her making coin angels...

This looks like the aftermath of when the king sends the guards to kill her.

Which, in the spirit of this story, still works.
#3 · 1
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Of all your sketches, this one is probably the most immediately unclear one to me. I can see the her talons, and the coins, but for the longest while I thought Griswielda was burried in the coins with only her talon sticking out of the pile. I didn't quite register the shapes to the left as her head until I read Moosetasm's comment. I think what's hurting you is not being able to see Giswielda's body from this angle. Her silhouette isn't really strong, so it takes a long time to understand her posture in relation to the perspective.
#4 · 1
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Lacking the story, this image is barely recognizable as anything. Maybe a carrot patch surrounded by donuts.
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I for one can tell exactly what's going on, right down to the thoughts inside the subject's head.