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Unrealized Three
Applebloom running though the orchard
Chapel at noon with it's bell ringing torture
Sounds to call on the chorist of
Wooded hounds of the forest
Scootaloo flying though the sky
Even though not she not so high
The bony dragon dives in haste
After the flying pony to give chase
Sweetie Belle swimming across the lake
I bet you can guess it's in haste
Because a gator is hungry for her fries
The laws that rule of three applies
The three friends escape their predicaments
Meet in town and happy to have all their ligaments
No thanks to the author's awful rhyming
Fifteen plus ninety six words that make them crying
Chapel at noon with it's bell ringing torture
Sounds to call on the chorist of
Wooded hounds of the forest
Scootaloo flying though the sky
Even though not she not so high
The bony dragon dives in haste
After the flying pony to give chase
Sweetie Belle swimming across the lake
I bet you can guess it's in haste
Because a gator is hungry for her fries
The laws that rule of three applies
The three friends escape their predicaments
Meet in town and happy to have all their ligaments
No thanks to the author's awful rhyming
Fifteen plus ninety six words that make them crying
Interesting to see pony content turn up in this round. As the author points out, the rhymes are sometimes weak (as are the rhythms). I just wish I knew more about what was going on. Apple Bloom's situation doesn't sound dangerous. I don't even know what's so urgent about them getting together so that surviving the journey there feels like it was done for some purpose. Aside from the rhymes/rhythms, there's also some mangled grammar, and not the kind that feels like it was done in service of adapting the language to the meter. A cute snapshot, but I don't know what the meaning is, since it seems like it's supposed to have a plot, but I never understood what it was.
