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An extra "fit" on line 2 you forgot to edit out. The rhymes all work, and other than that extra "fit," the syllable counts all work. The rhythm mostly does, though it's a little out of shape in one or two spots. Overall, pretty clean.
Amusing anecdote of the wind blowing the hat off the speaker's head and him imagining that the personified wind had done it on purpose. This was fun.
Amusing anecdote of the wind blowing the hat off the speaker's head and him imagining that the personified wind had done it on purpose. This was fun.
Ah, a limerick. The strictest definition uses amphibrachs, whereas you have anapests in the longer lines (but still amphibrachs in the short ones), but it's a loose definition, and a lot of limericks break the meter here and there.
Kind of a bit of nonsense verse, as the whole point is that we never have the first idea what this object might be or even look like. The title kind of hints it may be an SCP-like thing whose function actually is to stymie understanding. Cute.
Kind of a bit of nonsense verse, as the whole point is that we never have the first idea what this object might be or even look like. The title kind of hints it may be an SCP-like thing whose function actually is to stymie understanding. Cute.