There we go. Actually managed a submission. Took me long enough. Started with "Oh, it's too short" and added stuff, and a little more stuff, and "oh reached the limit stop darnit."
Ok - sorry for the typos - I was juggling too many things at the same time and did a rather poor job of editing. Time to clean this up before posting to FIMfiction, and thanks for providing me the motivation to write again after months of following other lesser pursuits!
