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#18373 · 6
Tbh, I've been wanting for one of these for months.
#20351 · 6
*BREAKING NEWS: horizon found in a tree writing saucy fanfiction*
#15911 · 5
TBH, 3rd commenter is a new record for me.
#16301 · 5
Oh, sweet, I love when there's art. Hooray, I get to do arts!
#13989 · 4
· on Hidden Colors
A couple general things before I get to the comments. The picture I took is terrible. I used the camera on my 10 year old Mac. So, colors and stuff got a little weird. It's also a little crooked. Furthermore, I have never been able to art. Like, I actually surprised myself with how well this turned out, considering.

So here's a story for you, I did base this very heavily off of Twilight. In fact, if you look carefully, you can see the remains of the wing lines. But then I thought to myself, "Twilight is so overused." So I did a quick think, and remembered Moondancer is a recolor of Twilight. So I made her. The proportions? Well, I'll get to that with GGA.

>>Zaid Val'Roa
I wasn't really sure how to make a good fire signalling where it 1. Didn't cover the cutie mark too much, 2. Didn't cover the entire body, and 3. Could still be seen with dark-ish green on black.

I mean, I voiced my actual complaints. I realized I forgot the glasses when it was too late to do anything.

I tried doing geometric shapes once. It failed. And then I took my artless self (I've never been able to art) and went to do other stuff. This one I just freehanded. And yeah, I'll certainly practise stuff when I have time/ motivation again.

Yeah... I kinda sorta based her colors on a fan drawing that didn't have them. Also, I really hate them. So my excuse is they sorta faded away like the eyes.

#3? Yay! I feel so special. Now go and try to draw better than this.
#15581 · 4
Well, I am extremely sad. I'm gonna miss the art deadline. I'll post the art on my fimfic page in, like, a day or two when it's complete.
#15627 · 4
· on Flutterflesh · >>Zaid Val'Roa >>Zaid Val'Roa
You mean... this image?

Yeah, I see it too.
#19177 · 4
Yeesss..... art turned in.
#10913 · 3
I used to think "may the fourth be with you" was funny, then I took an arrow in the knee.

No, don't skip it!!! Bad horizon!
#11500 · 3
· on Just Ignore It
Let me start out by saying that I have plans to expand this, play with the characters a bit, and then eventually get it over to Fimfiction... eventually. And thank you all for your wonderful feedback!

I wasn't really sure, I kinda left that open to the reader's interpretation. However, I have since then realized the mistake with doing so. Hopefully, it will be fixed when I expand this.

I meant it to be Season 1 Twilight, the one who broke into the Canterlot Archives, thought Celestia was gonna banish her for missing one assignment, and wasn't quite that skilled yet. But I don't think I conveyed that very well. So, I'll try to fix when I expand this.

Also, I couldn't think of anything for "Fahrenheit" at the time, nor "Celsius," so I went with "Centigrade." Which of these would you have liked more and how would you have done them?

I intend to!

True. But again, I meant it to be a Season 1 TwiTwi, who wasn't that experienced yet. And I thought about putting in something about not believing in curses, but that didn't fit. Anyway, I shall definitely take your Trixie suggestion to heart!

I at least succeeded in getting one chuckle, so thanks. Will expand it soon.

I have no clue! As said above, I left it open to the reader, one of my larger mistakes. And it will be expanded.

Hopefully, this will be fixed when I expand.

To be honest, I have no clue what a Discworld book is. But hopefully, your complaints will be fixed when I expand upon the story.

And you would be wrong! You and FrontSevens are clearly better authors than me. And I will take your suggestions to heart.

Yeah, previous commenters just about summed it up. And I've never even heard of the Convergent Series, so that it reminds you of it is interesting. In fact, this is one of the few stories I've written where it isn't based on something else.