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Look, I Just Want My Sandwich
Original Minific
Food and Magic Doesn't Mix
End of an Era
FiM Short Story
A Soul Falls From Grace
* Princess Not Included
FiM Minific
Look, I Just Want My Sandwich
Original Minific
The Mission of a Lifetime
#17398 · 3
I'm back for the first time in over 1 1/2 years.
Hopefully I can still write.
#4145 · 2
· on A Soul Falls From Grace
I want to preface this by saying yes, I know my writing was inherently flawed and I should have planned everything out much better... or at all. So I'll only be responding to corrections in what I wished to display even if I didn't do it as well as I could have.

1. Vengeance only took over the first time because she was unconscious and he took advantage of that to take control.

2. Sanguine has a double meaning. Joyful and blood-red.

I don't really have much more to add because the reviews I have been given are dead on about my failings in this story.

On another note though; I am currently rewriting this to be much longer and set in Sanguine's point of view with a lot more character and world building.
#4575 ·
· on The Mission of a Lifetime
Note to self: Spend more than 30 minutes writing your stories.

But yeah in all seriousness I see where you guys are coming from. The idea was good but the execution was flawed.
I'll take your words under advisement with my next attempts.
#4576 ·
· on Food and Magic Doesn't Mix
When I started writing this I felt very confident about it but by the time I finished I realised just how much I had to leave out and how much the remaining ideas would have lifted it up to be a better story.

But hey at least as I practice I slowly improve my skills.

I can honestly say I did much better with the stories this round than my failure last round.