Hmm. This one is sideways so it's rather hard to see what's happening unless I twist my computer screen around lmao. You have a lot of obvious skill and I like the shading of Starlight compared to the cutie mark thing in the background. The picture is very light, and could use some darkening to create more a more dramatic scene. I like how Starlight looms over Twilight and how Twilight is crumpled up on the ground. Nice picture!

I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say that this one wasn't finished haha. I can see that you have skill here. The shading of the horn is very pretty and the rest of the picture could use some dramatic shading as well. I love the muzzle and the expression that she has towards the book and her tears. Good job on this one!

"Drunk submission (Forgive me)" Never!!

I really like piece, the way she's coming towards us, and the angle. I absolutely adore the shadow on this, too. The way it defines her is perfect.

The only thing I have a problem with are the hair and the stairs, they kind of wrench you out of the immersion of real life horse Cadence to cartoon world. The stairs could be dimmed by making them a pastel brown instead of the dark green you have. It would go better with the color scheme you have going on.I would also suggest some overlapping layers to even out the colors so they don't pop out as much, or even painting her hair on.

Overall it's a beautiful piece of art, very pleasing to look at.

My favorite part about this art is the tower. Here we have a great view of the world surrounding it and get an idea that a pony is inside it without the picture being too ‘in your face’ about it.

(I absolutely adore the little tic tacs that she makes omg)

Also, her cup is great

I like the collage idea with a black void in the background. That also must have taken a lot of time to collect all of those starlight pictures haha.

The only problem I really have with this piece is that in some places there is blank space. (Where there are no pictures overlapping with eachother) Other than that this is a solid piece! :D

I really like this one because you had to go through all of the effort to cut a huge piece of paper and color it all in.

I really love the soft colors and I like the choice to leave most of the pencil marks in. It adds to the piece.

Very creative idea to make a starlight bookmark. XD I love it, it goes very well with the story.

I- this is beautiful. A true masterpiece of the ages. 10/10 -ign

I agree that the ending that everybody reading already knew what was going on. I think this fic could have worked better if the ending was left up to interpretation and the 'chicken' part a bit more pushed to the side to make this a bit more mysterious.

That trans joke in the end will have many people in a flutter, but I don't know how I feel about it yet. I did like all of the jokes in the beginning, though. They were cute, but like op said up there ^^ it needs a little bit more jokes.

It was very clear what was happening, although, in the beginning it had a cult feel to it??? (Probably just me lol)

I like the idea of mlp ponies interacting with real life horses. Its a nice story all in all with a cute ending.

>>Trick_Question
I'll challenge you to that. ;)

>>Zaid Val'Roa
Lmao I was actually going to make that reference but I decided against it, I wanted to make the piece a bit serious :P

.....now I'm slowly regretting it....

>>Fenton
>>horizon
Thank you so much for your guy's feedback! As you may have noticed I was stretched for time. I've had three hours of "free time" these past two weeks so I didn't have time to line it or create any semblance of a background.

Although I was pretty proud of my twilight I do need to work on backgrounds. It's a rough spot for me and I wasn't exactly sure on how to do it this time around.

Once again, thank you so much for the reviews!! :D

>>Trick_Question
Sure! You can credit me on deviantart or Instagram. (I think I'm gonna post the whole thing without the watermark on my deviantart later if you want)

I'm so glad you like it. 😄

dev: https://drawingdiscord.deviantart.com/
ig: https://www.instagram.com/dragon_discord/

I absolutely am in love with the shading in this picture!! It is so well done and is personally my favorite in this competition.

Im here for the praise kind of things, I don't do well criticizing people-even when they literally ask for it. Aaaaand I've never reviewed anything before.

So

That twist had me shook. I remember reading someone's review earlier who said something about a twist but I did not expect that at all.

I like the writing style and descriptions. The scenes were a bit confusing at times but were laid out nicely.

PS please keep writing, I really liked this story.

Question!!
For the drawing part, does the drawing have to do with the prompt or one of the stories that have been made?

Good luck to everyone!! I'm very eager to read your stories! ;)