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The Other Side · FiM Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
Word limit 2000–8000
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#1 ·
· · >>Anon Y Mous
Hmm. This one is sideways so it's rather hard to see what's happening unless I twist my computer screen around lmao. You have a lot of obvious skill and I like the shading of Starlight compared to the cutie mark thing in the background. The picture is very light, and could use some darkening to create more a more dramatic scene. I like how Starlight looms over Twilight and how Twilight is crumpled up on the ground. Nice picture!
#2 · 3
· · >>Anon Y Mous
It’s not fair to ding you on the rotation issue, Artist, and I won’t. I trust that you’ll watch for this issue in your next submission.

Pros: Your talent shows even in this unfinished piece. You have a good feel for expressive lines that use no more detail than they need. You clearly have experience and a good eye.

Cons: Stylistically, your large-eared, low-slung pony head puts me in mind of a bat more than a horse. It’s also not very clear that this character is meant to be SG; a color rendering would of course help. Twilight’s body on the ground looks odd; I can make out an ear but I can’t relate it to the rest of what should be her head.

I will count this as a mid-tier piece and hope to see more polished art from you next time around.
#3 · 1
Thank you guys for voting me third! (Although I don't really think it's well deserved...)
As I was finishing that hell-hole of a story I said to myself, "I need to somewhat redeem myself for entering this fic." lmao

Finals week is done and now I will have more time over the summer to study Spanish, write, and improve my entries for the art parts of the contest. :')

>>dragon discord

Uh... I honestly don't know why it turned when I entered it. I do have to say that it was late when I entered so idk.

As for the style thing, this is actually not my normal style. I wanted to try something different for this picture. My style is usually a bit more realistic than this, and the heads are certainly more proportional lol.

Thanks for the review ;)