Good luck to everyone!! I'm very eager to read your stories! ;)

I absolutely am in love with the shading in this picture!! It is so well done and is personally my favorite in this competition.

Im here for the praise kind of things, I don't do well criticizing people-even when they literally ask for it. Aaaaand I've never reviewed anything before.

So

That twist had me shook. I remember reading someone's review earlier who said something about a twist but I did not expect that at all.

I like the writing style and descriptions. The scenes were a bit confusing at times but were laid out nicely.

PS please keep writing, I really liked this story.

>>Trick_Question
Sure! You can credit me on deviantart or Instagram. (I think I'm gonna post the whole thing without the watermark on my deviantart later if you want)

I'm so glad you like it. 😄

dev: https://drawingdiscord.deviantart.com/
ig: https://www.instagram.com/dragon_discord/

I like the collage idea with a black void in the background. That also must have taken a lot of time to collect all of those starlight pictures haha.

The only problem I really have with this piece is that in some places there is blank space. (Where there are no pictures overlapping with eachother) Other than that this is a solid piece! :D

>>Fenton
>>horizon
Thank you so much for your guy's feedback! As you may have noticed I was stretched for time. I've had three hours of "free time" these past two weeks so I didn't have time to line it or create any semblance of a background.

Although I was pretty proud of my twilight I do need to work on backgrounds. It's a rough spot for me and I wasn't exactly sure on how to do it this time around.

Once again, thank you so much for the reviews!! :D

>>Zaid Val'Roa
Lmao I was actually going to make that reference but I decided against it, I wanted to make the piece a bit serious :P

.....now I'm slowly regretting it....

>>Trick_Question
I'll challenge you to that. ;)

My favorite part about this art is the tower. Here we have a great view of the world surrounding it and get an idea that a pony is inside it without the picture being too ‘in your face’ about it.

(I absolutely adore the little tic tacs that she makes omg)

Also, her cup is great

I really like piece, the way she's coming towards us, and the angle. I absolutely adore the shadow on this, too. The way it defines her is perfect.

The only thing I have a problem with are the hair and the stairs, they kind of wrench you out of the immersion of real life horse Cadence to cartoon world. The stairs could be dimmed by making them a pastel brown instead of the dark green you have. It would go better with the color scheme you have going on.I would also suggest some overlapping layers to even out the colors so they don't pop out as much, or even painting her hair on.

Overall it's a beautiful piece of art, very pleasing to look at.