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The Spring in Her Step · FiM Short Story ·
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#1 · 2
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Colorful and expressive bench scene. 9 of 10 someone-actually-drew-a-full-human-figure points. It's suggested to lessen the drawn lines in the face for a softer appearance. Please leaf onward, Artist!
#2 · 2
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This is comic book quality. Not quite at indie better than main stream level, but certain has more going on than Marvel or DC at this point. Color are good and it feels like this was taken as a snap shot of an unsuspecting subject. Not "smile for the camera" type of setup. Like this a lot.
#3 · 1
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I think my favorite part of this piece is her pose and figure. Both look natural to me, despite the shortcuts that the piece takes by hiding her waist. The shading also looks pretty good, with just a couple of exceptions (like the inside of her skirt). I think the part that could have definitely used the most work is her hair, which just doesn't quite have enough detail or movement in it to really mesh well with the rest of the piece. But I think everything else more or less does its job.

Thanks for drawing!