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Cold Water · Poetry Minific ·
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Did You Know That Samuel L. Jackson Voiced Frozone? I Didn't.
You know,
Somewhere on Fanfiction.net
I bet
Some teenager has shipped Frozone
--You know, from The Incredibles--
With Elsa,
Disney's Frozen cash cow.
And some folks
Well
They might frown
And look down
On this endeavor.
But I?
Not I.
Why,
I think it's kind of cool
And clever.
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#1 ·
· · >>Super_Trampoline
I did in fact know he voiced that character!

I don't get a lot out of this. I suppose it's trying to say people aren't very tolerant of interracial relationships? Or that the age difference is too great? (Put me in that second camp, unless it was handled very well.) The rhymes come irregularly enough that you have to look for them to find them, but it's subtle enough that I still came away from my first reading noticing that there were rhymes. I don't know if there's any other significance to why you picked these specific characters.

Not bad.
#2 ·
· · >>Super_Trampoline
>>Pascoite
Given the mention of fanfiction.net, a site infamous for the low quality of its content, this might be more referencing the often amateurish nature of cross-franchise crackships written by inexperienced authors in general.
#3 ·
· · >>Super_Trampoline
Meter, you maternal fornicator.
Do you practice it?
#4 ·
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>>Super_Trampoline
You are correct, Super Trampoline.

>>GroaningGreyAgony
haha