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Help, the earth is bleeding orange juice! I don’t have much more to say about this one, though. Sorry, Author. Thanks for contributing!

This was another piece that I kind of had to stare at for a while. At first I thought the orange and black spots were supposed to represent cities or something, and it was only when I read GGA's comment that I realized what the picture was trying to depict.
IMO, if you're going for the ultra-simplistic/symbolic route here, I think you need to make the orange spots a lot more tear-drop shaped, just to really convey what they are. And it wouldn't hurt either to reduce the number of holes, so the piece doesn't feel so much like a crowded gathering of spots. Maybe 3 holes in total would be enough.
IMO, if you're going for the ultra-simplistic/symbolic route here, I think you need to make the orange spots a lot more tear-drop shaped, just to really convey what they are. And it wouldn't hurt either to reduce the number of holes, so the piece doesn't feel so much like a crowded gathering of spots. Maybe 3 holes in total would be enough.

This feels strikingly political and yet I don't know what it's trying to say. I can't even guess. I think it may be because the image is so crisp, yet it's going for a violent message of some kind. It feels too minimalist, like it's a cartoon.
I'm sure there's a good idea in here.
I'm sure there's a good idea in here.

>>GroaningGreyAgony
>>Bachiavellian
>>Miller Minus
Uh, thanks for commenting. This drawing was hacked in ten minutes, so fast I didn't even notice that I'd used orange instead of red. Hark hark.
Probably deserved last place. I feel sorry for Baal.
>>Bachiavellian
>>Miller Minus
Uh, thanks for commenting. This drawing was hacked in ten minutes, so fast I didn't even notice that I'd used orange instead of red. Hark hark.
Probably deserved last place. I feel sorry for Baal.