This is... certainly well drawn, and I can appreciate the artistry and effort put into making this. But for some reason, it doesn't quite work for me. She just seems a little... shapeless outside of the chest.

This fits the story quite well. That's an interesting look for Fido too. Reminds me of old Dr. Who robots.

Yeah, you have some torso issues here, Artist. Apart from that, this is a creepy way to show Jules confronting the changes she’s undergone. Pencil was used somewhere in the formation of this image, so 8 of 11 graphite shards to you.

>>MLPmatthewl419, >>GaPJaxie

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Argh. I put most of my effort into drawing and coloring this, and comparatively little into The Hand and the Eye. So this turned out to be the lesser effort.

I really should have redrawn Jules from scratch, rather than try to fix the errors in my original sketch. But I was already coloring the piece and I kept slapping on bandaids and proceeding. I do like how Fido turned out.

Thanks for the comments!