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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
Organised by RogerDodger
Word limit 400–750
a work in progress
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#1 ·
· · >>Bachiavellian
This definitely captures Spike and Spike’s feeling for this story... But I want to see a wide eyed obsessed Twilight pointing at the screen.
#2 · 1
The best thing about your pieces, author, is that they're actually making me interested enough to read the story they're attached to.

Spike looks like a cute pouty baby here.
#3 · 1
I really like how the anti-shading makes the projector's beam really pop out. It's also really neat how it makes Spike's torso lose detail, as if the light is too bright to see clearly by in the dark room. I do have to echo >>Moosetasm in that I wish we could see Twilight, since the story is really about her. But this is a really neat snapshot, nonetheless.
#4 ·
A decent attempt at a dark room scene. Spike and the projector are recognizable. The lines are hasty, but they aren’t just scribbles that loosely try to corral an object; they form the hatching that adds depth to the scene.