This is definitely a chuckle-worthy idea, and the general composition of the figure within the frame of the shot looks good to me. I do have to note that due to the shape of the blue lighting effects, it took me several moments to identify the broom. At first glance, it looked to me like feathers or a tail or something, due to the organic-ish shapes of the blue lines. And I think it's worth a mention that the photoshop work around the face and right hand stick out a bit, since they have a much more vivid/bright skin tone than the other visible body parts.

Thanks for arting!

Do You See Anything When I Do This...?

Kudos to you and the model, Artist. It's true that it's not so obvious that thing is a broom, and your fleshtone shoopery is detectable, but this is otherwise a well composed shot. There's only one place it can take on my slate, and there it shall go...