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Lockdown · R-Rated Original Short Story ·
Organised by No_Raisin
Word limit 750–4000
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Fly Me to the Moon
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This conveys its visual information pretty quickly, so kudos for that. But on closer inspection, the background does come across as pretty simplistic, and I have some body troubles with the silhouette as well. It's not clear where we transition from waist to leg, which makes the right leg look vaguely longer than the left. I do like the definition we get around the joints of the arms, and I wish the legs came across as clearly.

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Lizard Uses Huge Fork on Enormous Cheese...?

I kid. The execution is a bit basic, perhaps hasty, but the shapes instantly set the scene. There's only one place it can take on my slate, and there it shall go...