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Message from the Underground · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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The sketch texture of the piece works really well in the underground, where the human(?) shapes are still detailed despite their near-invisibility. The white lines growing more fainter and erratic the deeper the picture goes is likewise a nice touch.

The top half is the picture's weak half in my mind, with the buildings and human figure seeming a little too simplistic to mesh with the detailed figures below them. Half-drawn windows and doors come off more as shortcuts than an earnest artistic flourish, especially considering the obvious effort put into the subterranean beings.
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WOO, this freaks me out and I dig it. The shapes below are just humanoid and dim enough to lend an appropriate amount of spookiness. Even though they don't have faces, I get the feeling they're looking at me...
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Rough in execution but eloquent in expression, this displays two worlds in juxtaposition very effectively. A creepy piece that justly inspired a lot of stories. An upper tier effort, thanks for creating it!
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Creepy stuff here. This is a great composition. You just keep scrolling down and it keeps GOING. Very strong concept.
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In which the average human doesn't know of his Morlock neighbors.

The top half is somewhat lackluster (especially with the drawn human figure there), but the bottom half makes up for it and then some. The idea of a Morlock-esque group of humans living in the underground and being able to crawl on the ceiling like lizards?! A sense of dread to be had, that is for sure.