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I think the guy on the sop box needs to be the focus, not the bored listener.
You do capture the listener’s boredom, but I want to see the barkers fire, or better yet, his crushed spirit. (That second one is hard, but I think I’ve seen some more of your work here where you portrayed rarely captured emotions.)
You do capture the listener’s boredom, but I want to see the barkers fire, or better yet, his crushed spirit. (That second one is hard, but I think I’ve seen some more of your work here where you portrayed rarely captured emotions.)
This struck me as kind of funny, with Throwback looking a bit like a cawing rooster back there. And while that's fine and dandy, it does break away from the mood of the original story a bit. It's also a little hard to tell what's going on in the background, with all those lines thatdon't really makes shakes on the right and left sides.
