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Under the Surface · Original Short Story ·
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#1 ·
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
This is... certainly well drawn, and I can appreciate the artistry and effort put into making this. But for some reason, it doesn't quite work for me. She just seems a little... shapeless outside of the chest.
#2 ·
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
This fits the story quite well. That's an interesting look for Fido too. Reminds me of old Dr. Who robots.
#3 · 1
Yeah, you have some torso issues here, Artist. Apart from that, this is a creepy way to show Jules confronting the changes she’s undergone. Pencil was used somewhere in the formation of this image, so 8 of 11 graphite shards to you.
#4 ·
>>MLPmatthewl419, >>GaPJaxie


Argh. I put most of my effort into drawing and coloring this, and comparatively little into The Hand and the Eye. So this turned out to be the lesser effort.

I really should have redrawn Jules from scratch, rather than try to fix the errors in my original sketch. But I was already coloring the piece and I kept slapping on bandaids and proceeding. I do like how Fido turned out.

Thanks for the comments!