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It's a Long Way Down · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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A Long Way Down
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#1 ·
Looking down at the world from above the clouds, it is amazing how small it is.

My biggest problem with this is the human figure; it is very evident in the middle of the drawing, but she doesn't look quite right proportionally.
#2 ·
A man doing the robot dance while falling. I don't know what does it say about our world but it's still funny.
#3 ·
This one just doesn't work with me. The human is wrong proportionally, and look too crayon-drawn.
#4 ·
I am wondering why this person seems to be smiling on the (I presume) way down.

As others stated, the landscape is passable but the human figure needs work.
#5 · 1
I think the biggest problem with the human figure is that it's got something of a Lego head: large relative to body, no neck, shoulders up at jaw level.

The curvature of the motion lines implies the figure is being thrown rather than simply falling. I might be reading too much into that, but if that was your intention, artist, then kudos on a nice bit of storytelling by implication.

Effective framing, and as others have said, everything but the figure feels aesthetically fine. Thank you for sharing.