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Hypergolic
I held such passionate conviction
And you such devastating presence
That we too could not meet
Without igniting something
Greater stronger, intense beyond understanding,
And as we swirl together
The heat of our need
Impels an opposite but fully equal reaction
That shoulder society the relentless downward pull
And sends everything up, up, up ...
And you such devastating presence
That we too could not meet
Without igniting something
Greater stronger, intense beyond understanding,
And as we swirl together
The heat of our need
Impels an opposite but fully equal reaction
That shoulder society the relentless downward pull
And sends everything up, up, up ...
Ha, I like the metaphor of the title as a relationship. Free verse, so nothing to evaluate about the construction. Simple but effective.
>>Pascoite
Hypergolic
Thanks for the kind words! I had set down my thoughts informally in this manner and resolved to turn it into something more rigorous later, but got distracted and so it must stand as is.
Hypergolic
Thanks for the kind words! I had set down my thoughts informally in this manner and resolved to turn it into something more rigorous later, but got distracted and so it must stand as is.