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Cold Water · Poetry Minific ·
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I Thought She Was Singing About His Poor Circulation. She Wasn't
"Cold as Ice" is my favorite Foreigner song.
It has a cool structure and harmonies, and is one of the few hard rock songs I can think of with three keyboard parts.
You know, my mom used to jokingly sing it about her dad.
Unfortunately, not all jokes are funny,
Seeing how
He was abusive.
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· · >>Super_Trampoline
“I Thought She Was…” is my favorite entrant out of the bunch that had this style.
It has a cool rhythm and title, and is one of the few poems of that bunch I can think of with a nice twist to it.
You know, unlike the other one I joked at in its review.
Though I don't think I was actually funny.
Anyway:
Fourth of eight.
#2 ·
· · >>Super_Trampoline
I'm not sure she meant that to actually be funny? She might have been just taking a dig at him.

There's a little something to this, about finding hidden meaning in unexpected places. There's a bit here, where you go off about the keyboard parts, that's extraneous. It doesn't have anything to do with the poem's point. Yet it's nice, because it creates this more conversational mood, like it's not trying to have laser focus on hammering its point.
#3 ·
· · >>Super_Trampoline
And there's a song by ELO
That I can't get out of my head,
And one by the Eagles too,
But I can't tell you why.
We remake ourselves
Around the music we have in common.
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>>Light_Striker
>>Pascoite
Everything in this poem is 100% true, by the way.

>>GroaningGreyAgony
lol nice lyrics drop. There's also of course the Classic IV song "Spooky" as well.