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A cute little story.
One thing I'd like to know is how the house even learned to talk in the first place...
One thing I'd like to know is how the house even learned to talk in the first place...
This gives a pretty good perspective.
I hadn't considered before how RD would've grown up, especially considering how competitive/"gamified" her parents were. If all she's ever done was win, then she's never learned to lose.
Her need to win has consumed her entire life to where everything is about winning.
I hadn't considered before how RD would've grown up, especially considering how competitive/"gamified" her parents were. If all she's ever done was win, then she's never learned to lose.
Her need to win has consumed her entire life to where everything is about winning.
Odd, could've sworn I commented on this earlier.
I really liked how you started with a humorously serious character, and then moved on to absurdity with how the other characters reacted to him.
The ending was a good resolution with how it tied the story back to reality.
Hope he doesn't get sunburned too badly.
I really liked how you started with a humorously serious character, and then moved on to absurdity with how the other characters reacted to him.
The ending was a good resolution with how it tied the story back to reality.
Hope he doesn't get sunburned too badly.
Well... this was certainly something
I'll be honest, I could not wipe the stupid grin off of my face the entire time.
I'll be honest, I could not wipe the stupid grin off of my face the entire time.
>>Whitbane
It seems to follow the source in placing the body in the floor, except that Poe had it dismembered.
It seems to follow the source in placing the body in the floor, except that Poe had it dismembered.
>>Dubs_Rewatcher
For what does happen, Grand Wizard does fit the tone. Considering the last sentence, the crystal ponies don't seem too perturbed.
For what does happen, Grand Wizard does fit the tone. Considering the last sentence, the crystal ponies don't seem too perturbed.
>>thisisalongname
Could it be that he's hallucinated the wings?
There's the wait to go to the doctor, would would imply a certain sort of doctor.
If your child grew wings, you could take them to likely any doctor. If your child thinks he's grown wings, then you need a special doctor. Those cost money.
And considering that Mother has to stay home to stop him from eating himself, money might be hard to come by.
Could it be that he's hallucinated the wings?
There's the wait to go to the doctor, would would imply a certain sort of doctor.
If your child grew wings, you could take them to likely any doctor. If your child thinks he's grown wings, then you need a special doctor. Those cost money.
And considering that Mother has to stay home to stop him from eating himself, money might be hard to come by.
>>Light_Striker
nanometers, son!
https://i.imgur.com/dZjevS8.png
>>horizon
I realized that I had the perfect data to work colors with, and so I had to.
nanometers, son!
https://i.imgur.com/dZjevS8.png
>>horizon
I realized that I had the perfect data to work colors with, and so I had to.
>>GroaningGreyAgony
Yes, but this one is an alicorn changeling with feathery wings! At least her tails not ratty like the rest of those nasty ole changelings.
Yes, but this one is an alicorn changeling with feathery wings! At least her tails not ratty like the rest of those nasty ole changelings.
I did get an inkling of what was happening early on, but I loved the surprise.
It didn't end exactly how I expected, but the ending was a great twist. I definitely was not expecting that to be the cause.
Since I haven't read any other stories yet, this one tops and bottoms my slate, though more tops than bottoms.
It didn't end exactly how I expected, but the ending was a great twist. I definitely was not expecting that to be the cause.
Since I haven't read any other stories yet, this one tops and bottoms my slate, though more tops than bottoms.
"You were running too many excel macros in the barn, and it caught on fire!"
Anyone who's used Excel knows that it's the VLOOKUPs and the macros that can bring even the fastest computer to it's knees.
This has to be the fourth absurdity fic that I've read today, and I've loved ALL of them.
Reminds me of the joke where a man has a wife and a young mistress. Every time the man sees his mistress, she plucks out one of his grey hairs so that he seems younger. Every time he sees his wife, she plucks out one of his black hairs, so that way he looks older.
Eventually he becomes bald!
I liked this story. From the discussion in the writeoff chat, I was expecting to see a preen-fic.
Eventually he becomes bald!
I liked this story. From the discussion in the writeoff chat, I was expecting to see a preen-fic.
When I read the title, I expected the Flim Flams to be selling counterfeit cookies, or something along those lines.
The start of this story had me giggling, and the absurdity of the ending had me groaning and laughing.
Wish you the best of luck on this entry. I loved it.
The start of this story had me giggling, and the absurdity of the ending had me groaning and laughing.
Wish you the best of luck on this entry. I loved it.
So I guess this is Lesson Zero Twilight taken to the next level. Without an external problem to solve, she creates one (Much to thr detriment of her friend's lives ).
An interesting piece.
An interesting piece.
Flim and Flam's Fabulous Fidget Flanges
Knowing Hasbro, it's only a matter of time before this is canon. You've doomed us all!
Silly, questionably canon, but I liked it.
Quifons, a silly place.
It's an interesting concept, a beautiful world that only the innocent children appear to be aware of.
It's an interesting concept, a beautiful world that only the innocent children appear to be aware of.
Paging WIP