Well it's a story. It's not as funny as it should be, but I'm falling asleep and hopefully some of my effort shows through.

Oh hey, wooden spoon. Considering that I've barely written anything in a year and a half and I was falling asleep while writing I can't really be too upset. Also most of the stories this time round were really good.

Overall I liked the concept of my story but I felt like I didn't have much to back it up with. I though the ending was sort of weak, everything past the first two paragraphs weren't particularly well written, the universe wasn't fully set up.

This was me getting back into things, I'll be sure to blow everyone away in a couple weeks.