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To Dwell on Dreams
I once knew
a little fish
who only had
a little wish:
that she might swim
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
But she was in
a little pond
whose owner was
a little fond
of how she swished
her little tail
and how light caught
her little scales
(so white with just
a little red).
This filled her with
a little dread,
because it seemed
our little fish
would never have
her little wish
that she might swim
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
So she made
a little plan
to soon outwit
that little man:
she would go on
a little quest,
though she felt
a little stressed,
and break out of
the little pool
and make that man
a little fool.
Oh yes! She'd be
a little proud
and make her friends
a little wowed
at how she'd swim
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
Our fish did love
this little dream
of swimming down
a little stream
and she spent lots
of little days
dreaming in
a little haze
of rivers and
a little wave
which, if she was
a little brave,
she could ride
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
Yes, she'd need
a little luck:
for now, she was
a little stuck
and could not find
a little stream,
no way to have
her little dream.
She found herself
a little caught
by missing such
a little thought
from her design:
a little prep
would surely find
the little step
her plan required.
A little hitch,
but otherwise
her little pitch
was flawless: just
a little bit
of cunning and
a little wit
would find it with
a little time,
and then she'd make
the little climb,
if she could wait
a little more
she'd make it to
that little shore...
Oh! She craved
a little luck
to no more be
a little stuck.
And that is how
our little fish,
who only had
a little wish,
thought about
her little scheme
to one day have
her little dream
for almost all
her little life,
and never knew
a little strife
swimming in
her little pond
whose owner was
a little fond
even though
her little scales
had now turned
a little pale.
In fact she'd grown
a little old,
and never been
a little bold
enough to leave
her little pool,
for she was
a little fool
who lived within
a little trance
waiting for
a little chance.
Perhaps it is
a little sad,
but I'm myself
a little glad
that my good friend,
this little fish,
did not achieve
her little wish,
for though it seems
a little wrong:
that's why I sing
my little song.
Sometimes we have
a little dream,
and dwell upon
a little scheme
of cunning and
a little wit
and muse for just
a little bit
too long. I hope
this little tale
will help to lift
that little veil
and let you see
a little way
beyond your dreams
this little day.
For when you have
a little wish,
remember then
our little fish
and hold onto
this little fact:
life is made
of little acts.
We must do
our little part
to make ourselves
a little start
or we will be
a little stuck:
it's action, not
a little luck,
that would have let
that little fish
swim free and get
her little wish.
a little fish
who only had
a little wish:
that she might swim
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
But she was in
a little pond
whose owner was
a little fond
of how she swished
her little tail
and how light caught
her little scales
(so white with just
a little red).
This filled her with
a little dread,
because it seemed
our little fish
would never have
her little wish
that she might swim
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
So she made
a little plan
to soon outwit
that little man:
she would go on
a little quest,
though she felt
a little stressed,
and break out of
the little pool
and make that man
a little fool.
Oh yes! She'd be
a little proud
and make her friends
a little wowed
at how she'd swim
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
Our fish did love
this little dream
of swimming down
a little stream
and she spent lots
of little days
dreaming in
a little haze
of rivers and
a little wave
which, if she was
a little brave,
she could ride
a little way
downriver to
a little bay.
Yes, she'd need
a little luck:
for now, she was
a little stuck
and could not find
a little stream,
no way to have
her little dream.
She found herself
a little caught
by missing such
a little thought
from her design:
a little prep
would surely find
the little step
her plan required.
A little hitch,
but otherwise
her little pitch
was flawless: just
a little bit
of cunning and
a little wit
would find it with
a little time,
and then she'd make
the little climb,
if she could wait
a little more
she'd make it to
that little shore...
Oh! She craved
a little luck
to no more be
a little stuck.
And that is how
our little fish,
who only had
a little wish,
thought about
her little scheme
to one day have
her little dream
for almost all
her little life,
and never knew
a little strife
swimming in
her little pond
whose owner was
a little fond
even though
her little scales
had now turned
a little pale.
In fact she'd grown
a little old,
and never been
a little bold
enough to leave
her little pool,
for she was
a little fool
who lived within
a little trance
waiting for
a little chance.
Perhaps it is
a little sad,
but I'm myself
a little glad
that my good friend,
this little fish,
did not achieve
her little wish,
for though it seems
a little wrong:
that's why I sing
my little song.
Sometimes we have
a little dream,
and dwell upon
a little scheme
of cunning and
a little wit
and muse for just
a little bit
too long. I hope
this little tale
will help to lift
that little veil
and let you see
a little way
beyond your dreams
this little day.
For when you have
a little wish,
remember then
our little fish
and hold onto
this little fact:
life is made
of little acts.
We must do
our little part
to make ourselves
a little start
or we will be
a little stuck:
it's action, not
a little luck,
that would have let
that little fish
swim free and get
her little wish.
I like the setup to this, but the structural constraints often make it so that the plot advancement per line is a little small (heh), and there's a lot of the middle that ends up being very vague. I'm also wondering how the fish even knew of the river and bay or anything else beyond where it lived. It was also an odd shift to have most of the poem feel like it was in the fish's perspective, only for it to turn out to be a third-person storyteller at the end. I like the sentiment that little steps add up to big ones.