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Moving Targets · Original Short Story ·
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For some reason, the really simple but effective linework with the baby really clicked with me. Overall, the shapes are good, and I like how we get a sense of her legs' movement beneath her skirt/dress. I'm not sure if you intended it, but the clean lines of the scope reticle kind of contrast with the sketchiness of the woman and baby. It makes the piece seem very strongly two-layered, which I guess plays into your favor.

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