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Moving Targets · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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Hold Still and Let Me SMITE You
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I really liked the cartoony, thick linework here, which helps give the piece a sense of heft and roughness. But I think I'm having some trouble with the postures of our two characters here; they seem a little stiff in the way their lower bodies are arranged. Not exactly sure why this is the case, but that's how it comes to me.

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