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Against the Current · Friendship is Short Shorts Short Short ·
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Might Have Beens
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I really like the emphasis here on the difference in their silhouettes. Also, Rarity's hair and coat are so fucking cute that I want to squeeze her. I also love it when artists go for the whole classical unicorn look with the curved horns and the fetlocks and all. The abstract background is also cool, and I love how you gave Twilight the subtle classical halo (albeit square-shaped). Overall, a lovely piece and one of my favorites from this round. Thank you for arting!
#2 · 1
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At first I thought it said "Might Have Beans," and I was envisioning Twilight struggling to confess that she ingested an excess of legumes, which would soon make things even more awkward between these two. :-p

I kid, of course. To me this absolutely screams cover art. Cleaning up a few of the lingering sketch lines would elevate this, but it is strong.